enjoyed the video, and the song, and indeed the whole album it’s from! but don’t worry about “the floor of heaven breaks” being “too poetic”. it’s not the most obvious of metaphors, but less obvious ones are often more efficacious. in a song like “break our hearts”, which is about bringing Christ into the world, i can see why you wanted the turns of phrase to be everyday…but in blessing and honour–if you can’t get poetic in a song about what worship is like in heaven, when can you?

hoping (and praying) that the treatment is going well, and that you’re getting your strength back…

chris